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PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:00 pm    Post subject: A one sentence story Reply with quote

As a 'writer', I feel it is my duty to post the first thread upon this forum

We shall write a one sentence story i.e. one sentence each and see where it takes us...

The Story

It was a dark and thundery night, as our hero opened the front door of Miserden House.


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

His eyes stung from the swift cutting breeze endured as he slowly peered into the darkness that seemed to succumb the entire hallway.


Good idea K
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 7:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

As his eyes slowly adjusted to the darkness he could make out a strange shape slowly coming towards him......
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 8:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[I haven't got the energy to write a whole chapter these days ]

It was the figure of a large bosomed woman, unsteady on her feet as she waved a candelabra shakily in the air.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Come in.....Mr Penitent... we have been expecting you" she eventually mutters with a strange look in her eye as she turned to lead the way.... He slowly follows her...



(I think this is grand for now anyway K )
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Across the dust strewn hallway, along a narrow corridor filled with pictures of people from years gone by, to the open door of the study where Mr Penitent heard a familiar voice cry out in surprise.....
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 11:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

'Margaret? Margaret!' cried the voice, making the woman start guiltily and cower back into the shadows as Mr Penitent frowned in surprise.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"How did the voice know I used to be called Margaret?" thought Mr Penitent in shock.......
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

He exchanged glances with The Other Margaret, as suddenly the brown leather wingback chair spun round to reveal the speaker.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 8:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

in another room a mad psychotic nicknamed kiltman , was watched her on camera he had a microphone in his right hand.



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