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K Supporting Actor

Joined: 02 Aug 2007 Posts: 522 Location: Opposite Town
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:00 pm Post subject: A one sentence story |
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As a 'writer', I feel it is my duty to post the first thread upon this forum
We shall write a one sentence story i.e. one sentence each and see where it takes us...
The Story
It was a dark and thundery night, as our hero opened the front door of Miserden House.
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Lucifer_666 Site


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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:05 pm Post subject: |
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His eyes stung from the swift cutting breeze endured as he slowly peered into the darkness that seemed to succumb the entire hallway.
Good idea K  |
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Catnapper Site


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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 7:02 pm Post subject: |
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| As his eyes slowly adjusted to the darkness he could make out a strange shape slowly coming towards him...... |
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K Supporting Actor

Joined: 02 Aug 2007 Posts: 522 Location: Opposite Town
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 8:53 pm Post subject: |
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[I haven't got the energy to write a whole chapter these days ]
It was the figure of a large bosomed woman, unsteady on her feet as she waved a candelabra shakily in the air. |
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Lucifer_666 Site


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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:03 am Post subject: |
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"Come in.....Mr Penitent... we have been expecting you" she eventually mutters with a strange look in her eye as she turned to lead the way.... He slowly follows her...
(I think this is grand for now anyway K ) |
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Catnapper Site


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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:28 am Post subject: |
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| Across the dust strewn hallway, along a narrow corridor filled with pictures of people from years gone by, to the open door of the study where Mr Penitent heard a familiar voice cry out in surprise..... |
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K Supporting Actor

Joined: 02 Aug 2007 Posts: 522 Location: Opposite Town
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 11:23 am Post subject: |
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| 'Margaret? Margaret!' cried the voice, making the woman start guiltily and cower back into the shadows as Mr Penitent frowned in surprise. |
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:31 pm Post subject: |
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"How did the voice know I used to be called Margaret?" thought Mr Penitent in shock.......  |
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K Supporting Actor

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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:04 pm Post subject: |
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| He exchanged glances with The Other Margaret, as suddenly the brown leather wingback chair spun round to reveal the speaker. |
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Joined: 31 Jul 2007 Posts: 4066 Location: scotland
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 8:32 am Post subject: |
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in another room a mad psychotic nicknamed kiltman , was watched her on camera he had a microphone in his right hand.
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" rest in pppppeeeaaassseeeee." |
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